
(22-23高二上·江西南昌·开学考试)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Surviving Mount Rainier
Bad luck and poor timing left Kart and three climbers stuck on Mount Rainier for several long days. They faced mountain climbing’s toughest tests. One man suffered altitude sickness; ice and rockfall rained down at night; cold nights in a tent that got torn left them hypothermic(体温过低的). Calm confidence, skill and the courage to continue up the route, despite illness and injury, likely saved their lives.
The climbers set out on a Friday, camping low on the route the first night because they were concerned about rockfall after a climber had recently died in an accident at the route’s typical high camp. On Saturday, at about 10,500 feet, one of the climbers became sick from the altitude, which began to slow them down. They needed to keep moving, so they put him in the lead so he could move at a pace he was comfortable with.
By Sunday evening, the ill climber was exhausted, and they had to make an unplanned camp on steep snow. They were in a bad place—on a platform about the size of a table under an ice cliff. The wind got stronger during the night, ripping the tent and snapping the poles. They tried to secure it by placing their packs and rocks around the edges. Finally, they just stuck their feet between the rocks and held the tent with their bodies. It was a cold night.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
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On Monday, they managed to call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers (护林员) before losing signal.
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On Wednesday, they gathered everything and decided to carry on with their climb.
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【答案】One possible version:
On Monday, they managed to call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers (护林员) before losing signal. They set up what was left of the tent as best they could and stayed where they were, praying for the early arrival of their salvation. But for several days, they watched beyond all hope as high winds prevented the rangers’ attempts at a helicopter rescue. Their food was running out and they shared a single bottle of snow melt each day. Then an icefall buried their tent platform and squeezed them together. It was impossible to climb down.
On Wednesday, they gathered everything and decided to carry on with their climb. They climbed up slowly and carefully, resting when they were weak. It didn’t take long until the wind froze them in place. That was the scariest moment. Their spirits began to sink and they started to doubt if they could continue. Kart thought of all the people who loved him, and it really hit him they must be worried. As he tried to climb again and again, he just kept yelling out to his friends, “We have to get there.” However, as they got onto the final slope to the summit, the weather cleared. Suddenly, a helicopter appeared out of nowhere. They were rescued.
【知识点】登山探险
、迎接挑战
、记叙文
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写,文章讲述了Kart和三位被困雷尼尔山登山者的遭遇。故事按照时间顺序展开。他们在周五出发,周六,一位队员的高原反应减缓他们的速度,让他们在周日不得不更换临时扎营地点——在冰崖下一个桌子那么大的平台上。糟糕的帐篷的选址以及恶劣的天气使他们帐篷严重受损,让他们度过寒冷的一晚上。周一他们联系上911,但是恶劣天气让救援无法到达,食物要耗尽,此时也无法下山。因此,周三他们聚集所有物品决定继续向上攀登上山,历经艰辛与危险,终于爬到山顶,天气放晴,他们得救了。
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